tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-769625919976094759.post3828854594524708044..comments2023-10-08T08:00:31.038-04:00Comments on Perspicacity: The One (A Mama Kat Writing Prompt)Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18041289458556475888noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-769625919976094759.post-68957240243578848552011-08-21T12:10:02.824-04:002011-08-21T12:10:02.824-04:00Love it! Fiction is one thing I just cannot execut...Love it! Fiction is one thing I just cannot execute well! This is great!!KatBouskahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11556451375792958743noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-769625919976094759.post-27901297892666382932011-08-20T08:55:18.986-04:002011-08-20T08:55:18.986-04:00Looks like her heart knew something she didn't...Looks like her heart knew something she didn't.JDaniel4's Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10354900916937838719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-769625919976094759.post-85907346060381627582011-08-19T16:43:50.910-04:002011-08-19T16:43:50.910-04:00Found you through Mom Loop Comment FollowFound you through Mom Loop Comment FollowBarbara Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09372190768792707733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-769625919976094759.post-11389273564769477182011-08-19T08:53:38.205-04:002011-08-19T08:53:38.205-04:00Oh, I like that. Carrie's right, though, about...Oh, I like that. Carrie's right, though, about the jump in scene & time...but then again, this is a first draft. I like!Kathleen Basihttp://ww.kathleenbasi.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-769625919976094759.post-8690298230184097182011-08-18T15:50:30.308-04:002011-08-18T15:50:30.308-04:00Aww this is a sweet story. I agree with Carrie th...Aww this is a sweet story. I agree with Carrie though, I had to do a name check. And great song!Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01640871678908297706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-769625919976094759.post-3379344611761625692011-08-18T09:19:07.158-04:002011-08-18T09:19:07.158-04:00ahhh young love :) Nice little story.
My only cri...ahhh young love :) Nice little story.<br /><br />My only critique is the jump from Tierney and Jake on the porch to her and Dave running felt sudden. I wasn't quite sure if maybe I'd misread the name of the guy she was with at first.<br /><br />Visiting from Mama KatCarriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-769625919976094759.post-386488964544472582011-08-18T08:45:31.917-04:002011-08-18T08:45:31.917-04:00Such a sweet story!
xo SusieSuch a sweet story!<br /><br />xo SusieSusie Klinehttp://www.motherhoot.comnoreply@blogger.com